not really funny, but.....
It made me give a quick exhale of breath, for that, I give you a two.
not really funny, but.....
It made me give a quick exhale of breath, for that, I give you a two.
hmmmm. maybe you should watch my other cartoons. i.e STD's that ones my most popular, search it up.
w00t!
YAY NINJAS!
pretty funny
honestly, I chuckled.....
The deal or no deal thing didn't have to be so drawn out though.......
good......good.........
pretty trippy......
hmmmm......
you should give this movie sound......
OMG!
SO FUNNY I NEARLY CRAPPED MYSELF!!!11
LAUGHING TO BURSTING!
EL-OH-FREAKIN'-EL!!!1
cute......I guess
ironically, this was better than the second one......
I even laughed......once.......kind of.......
I knew you had potential, but why do you think the second one is better?
Just look at the scores.
sorry, dude.....
you have potential, but please......work harder next time....here are some pointers:
1 the sprites were bad. some of them didn't even have transparent backgrounds, and though you may be proud of your home-baked sprites, (or sprite as the case may be) you didn't have to go through the unnecessary work just to come out with a bad sprite. and you constantly used pictures when you could've just drawn it in with flash itself.....
2 the jokes were bad, or non-existant. though it may have been "cute-funny", even a bad joke is better than no joke at all....
3 the animation was bad. the animation really and obviously half-assed, for gosh-sakes you didn't even bother to tween most of the time.
If you made another one with these tips, I'm pretty sure I'd give you a 5. When you make a flash, be sure to put your heart, mind, and back into it.....
:P i need to do more flash stuff....
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