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not really funny, but.....

It made me give a quick exhale of breath, for that, I give you a two.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

hmmmm. maybe you should watch my other cartoons. i.e STD's that ones my most popular, search it up.

w00t!

YAY NINJAS!

pretty funny

honestly, I chuckled.....

The deal or no deal thing didn't have to be so drawn out though.......

TxZam responds:

yea i know...

i was board though.

good......good.........

pretty trippy......

hmmmm......

you should give this movie sound......

OMG!

SO FUNNY I NEARLY CRAPPED MYSELF!!!11

LAUGHING TO BURSTING!

EL-OH-FREAKIN'-EL!!!1

cute......I guess

ironically, this was better than the second one......

I even laughed......once.......kind of.......

I knew you had potential, but why do you think the second one is better?

Brad5987243058 responds:

Just look at the scores.

sorry, dude.....

you have potential, but please......work harder next time....here are some pointers:

1 the sprites were bad. some of them didn't even have transparent backgrounds, and though you may be proud of your home-baked sprites, (or sprite as the case may be) you didn't have to go through the unnecessary work just to come out with a bad sprite. and you constantly used pictures when you could've just drawn it in with flash itself.....

2 the jokes were bad, or non-existant. though it may have been "cute-funny", even a bad joke is better than no joke at all....

3 the animation was bad. the animation really and obviously half-assed, for gosh-sakes you didn't even bother to tween most of the time.

If you made another one with these tips, I'm pretty sure I'd give you a 5. When you make a flash, be sure to put your heart, mind, and back into it.....

:P i need to do more flash stuff....

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